Monday 24 November 2014

Ghazal Antakshari….

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  • #61512

    p u r n i m a
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    Punkaj Udhas Sung this Gazal. Very nice choice.

    Watch 2 different video on same Gazal and tell me which one u like ?

    Who is writer/Shayar of this Gazal ?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-s_IMWz05Q

    and

    http://www.metacafe.com/watch/532060/hema_malini_in_wet_sexy_chandi_jaisa_rang_hai_tera_gazal_re/

    #61513

    vaibhavi
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    both r nice dear

    but i m sorry to say dat i dont know much more about the writer…….i just remembered so i posted

    sorry!!!!!!!!!!

    #61514

    p u r n i m a
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    To expand your information, This song was written by Mumtaz Roshan,

    Inspiration from a Gazal of Qateel Shifai “ghoongharu toot gaye”

    Some day I will post that Gazal too….

    #61515

    vaibhavi
    Participant

    Thanks Dear

    #61516

    p u r n i m a
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    havaa Khaamosh hai, aur chup hain sitaare
    sisak kar so gaye hain aramaan hamaare

    na baaz aayaa muqaddar mujhe mitaane se
    bhari bahaar men hun dur aashiyaane se
    na baaz aayaa muqaddar mujhe mitaane se

    qusur unakaa, na meri khataa, na duniyaa ki, na duniyaa ki
    mit gai khud hi men, mitane ke ik bahaane se
    na baaz aayaa muqaddar mujhe mitaane s

    bujhi naa pyaas meri
    pi ke dekh li har shai
    pyaasi hi laut chali main bhare mai-khaane se
    na baaz aayaa muqaddar mujhe mitaane se
    bhari bahaar men hun dur aashiyaane se
    na baaz aayaa muqaddar mujhe mitaane se

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    a nice poem from Mahendra Pran

    #61517

    vaibhavi
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    hey purnima i got one another

    Aur aahista kijiye baatein, dhadakane koi sun raha hoga - 2
    Labj girane na paaye honton se, waqt ke haath inako chun lenge
    Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva, raaj ki saari baat sun lenge
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein

    Aise bolo ki dil ka afasaana, dil sune aur nigaah doharaaye - 2
    Apane chaaro taraf ki ye duniya
    Saans ka shor bhi na sun paaye, na sun paaye
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein, dhadakane koi sun raha hoga
    Labj girane na paaye hoton se, waqt ke haath inako chun lenge
    Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva, raaj ki saari baat sun lenge
    Aur aahista kijiye batein...

    Aayiye band karale darwaaje, raat sapane chura na le jaaye - 2
    Koi jhonka hawa ka aawara, dil ki baaton ko uda na le jaye, na le jaye
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein, dhadakane koi sun raha hoga
    Labj girane na paaye hoton se, waqt ke haath inako chun lenge
    Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva, raaj ki saari baat sun lenge
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein

    Aaj itane karib aa jaao , duriyon ka kahi nishaan na rahe - 2
    Aise ek dusare me gum ho jayen, faasala koi darmiya na rah jaye, na rah jaye
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein, dhadakane koi sun raha hoga
    Labj girane na paaye hoton se, waqt ke haath inako chun lenge
    Kaan rakhate hain ye darodiva, raaj ki saari baat sun lenge
    Aur aahista kijiye baatein

    #61518

    p u r n i m a
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    watch this Gazal on youtube

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kKmg8hjwcQU

    Go to below link , u will find more from Pankaj Udhas

    http://music.punjabcentral.com/album/?album=3600

    #61519

    p u r n i m a
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    ham ko to gardish-e-haalaat pe ronaa aayaa
    rone vaale tujhe kis baat pe ronaa aayaa

    kaise mar-mar ke guzaari hai tumhen kyaa maalum
    raat bhar, taaron bhari raat pe ronaa aayaa

    kitane betaab the rim-jhim men piyenge lekin
    aai barasaat, to barasaat pe ronaa aayaa

    kaun rotaa hai kisi aur ke gham ki Khaatir
    sab ko, apani hi kisi baat pe ronaa aayaa

    'Saif' ye din to qayaamat ki tarah guzaraa hai
    jaane kyaa baat thi har baat pe ronaa aayaa

    #61520

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    [???????-?-????=tale of desire]

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    [???-?-???=a person with real heart]

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    [??????= weak; ??????= happy]

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    [??-????= lack of gentility,cruelty]

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    #61521

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    -a fine Ghazal from Atahar Nafees [watch here : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_VKBMrpWRTU

    #61522

    mamatha
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    ye daulat bhi le lo, ye shoHrat bhi le lo
    bhale cheen lo muJhse meri jawaani
    magar muJhko lauta do bachchpan ka saawan
    wo kaagaz ki kasthi wo baarish ka paani

    mohalle ki sabse nishaani purani
    wo buDhiya jise bachche kehte the naani
    wo naani kee baatoN mein pariYoN ka DeRa
    wo chehre ke JhuriYoN meiN sadiYoN ka phera
    bhulaaYe nahiN bhool saqta hai koi
    wo choti see raateN wo lambi kahaaNi

    kaDi dhooP meiN apne ghar se nikalna
    wo chiDiya wo bulbul wo thithli pakaDna
    wo guDiya ki shaadi pe laDna jHagaDna
    wo JhooloN se girna, wo giR ke sambhalNa
    wo pithal ke challoN ke pyaare se tho'fe
    wo TuTi hui chudiYoN ki nishaani

    kabhi re't ke ooNche Tilon pe jaana
    gharOnde banana, banaake miTaana
    wo maasoom chaahat ki tasveer apni
    wo khwaboN khiloNo ki taabir jaageer apni
    na duniYa ka gham tha na rishtoN ke bandhan
    baDi khoobsoorat thi wo zindgaani

    #61523

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    Ghazal from Ghulam Ali watch here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3VhTwUXNME

    #61524

    Kokamal
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    Not part of antaaksharee, but a few asha'r

    kar dee hei meiqade mein sah'r, maine shaam se

    meena se kuch sukoon mila hei na jaam se

    kar dee hei………

    allah re kamaal sitamgar kee saasdgee

    joDa hei toD-toD ke, reshtaa salaam se

    kar dee hae…..

    - Shaa'ir Jameel HaapuDee

    [ participation by courteous suggestion of another participant ]

    #61525

    p u r n i m a
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    Welcome Kokamal, nice ashaa'r you have given.You are from Gaziabad near New Delhi UP, so well knowing Urdu, I will request to kindly give meanings of “HARD WORDS OF URDU” if any,in your post.

    Below link will take you at another thread name”aap ka jo ji chahe wo geet gaao” All the best.

    http://www.bollywoodlyrics.com/cs/forums/p/2524/71360.aspx#71360

    Here is one from Masroor Anwar:

    ham ko kis ke Gham ne maaraa, ye kahaani phir sahi
    kisane toDaa dil hamaaraa, ye kahaani phir sahi

    dil ke luTane kaa sabab, puuchho na sab ke saamane
    naam aayegaa tumhaaraa, ye kahaani phir sahi

    nafaraton ke teer khaa kar, doston ke shahar men
    ham ne kis kis ko pukaaraa, ye kahaani phir sahi

    kyaa bataayen pyaar ki baazi vafaa ki raah men
    kaun jeetaa, kaun haaraa, ye kahaani phir sahi

    [watch this fine Ghazal sung by Ghulam Ali @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vSBCCB6_r6g

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    #61526

    Kokamal
    Participant

    Thanks, PoorNima. Will try to give explanations of of foreign words and expressions so as to make the poetry comprehensible.

    Here is a love-letter nazm [in a nazm all ashaa'r have one topic while in a ghazal, all ashaa'r may be on different topics. This is one difference]

    nazm aTkee huee hei seene mein

    misre uljhe hue hein hoTon par

    uDte firte hein titliyon kee tarah

    lafz kaaghaz pe beiThte hee naheen

    kabse beiTha hua hoon, mein jaana

    saada kaaghaz pe likh ke naam tera

    bas tera naam hee mukammal hei

    is se behtar bhee, nazm kya hogee

    ["Gulzaar"]

    nazm = poem

    misra = the line of a shei'r [couplet], misre is plural by usage

    lafz = akshar/alphabets

    jaana = more dear than self's life, beloved, feminine

    mukammal = complete in itself, full

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